Aug
26
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It as been amazing being a member of 4s, however it is now 6 weeks of holiday, and I will be moving up to year 5  at the end of the summer, and so will my friends. The good thing is I will still see Miss Startup, as she is going to be the class next to us. There are going to be so many changes when we go back.(This is for Miss Startup) I have been learning all the time at home in the summer, and I think I have improved. Thank you so much to the people who have given feedback to our posts, and a massive thank you to Miss Startup, for being the best teacher ever.

 

love from

Sophie

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Jul
16
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Electricity

Jul
16
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4.6.400 AD

Dear Dairy,

Today was an interesting day. I felt nervous, axious, and exited today. I was getting on the plain, wooden, dull boat. My arms were wobbling, my teeth were chattering, and my knees were shaking. As I was getting on the boat, I saw my buddy (Os). We all sang a song. I was a bit late, as I was getting my armour on.When we were singing the fun song, I was running on the spot. It was time. The battle of Reading. My sword disappeared. All our swords went missing. We said, Oh well, and went out with only a shield. Of course! We failed. I thought I was dead. Luckily, I wasn’t. However, a few of my friends, my closest friends, perished. When I finally woke up, I was wobbling around. We found out wee our swords went. THE REVOLTING SAXONS TOOK THEM!!!! We snuck over there, and got our weapons back. We did the battle again. We went a line at a time. A line at a time, marched slowly towards themal, we circled, next we KILLED. VICTORY! We jumped up and down. Also we screamed in extment.

Talk to you soon

from

sae

Jul
16
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59 AD Englefield Reading

Dear diary,

Oh my, I can’t believe what just happened! Today was exiting, lucky and a nerve racking day. I don’t know where to begin! I’ll try though. So, it all happened when me, and the heroic Vikings saved the day, well…. We all killed some Saxons anyway. As dawn approached, we all rushed in the  boat sailing away. I was shivering with fear, I’m just glad it’s over now. There was an evil grin that spread across my dirt fave. We where singing a famous Viking song we would use to bring us luck. As Reading came in sight, my stomach was now full of butterflys; I felt sick and nervous. Slowly and carefully, the captain of the boat stopped at an old, forgotten dock that couldn’t be seen. He pulled down the sail, which was gleaming white, we all charged out with are swords ready to battle. I couldn’t stand still when I got my first kill. Some people had gone to safety, but the others wouldn’t give up. Blood was scattered along my face, dead bodies were all around me. Ooh the blood. We al rushed into our boat. Not believing I did this yesterday my teeth were shattering, my palms were sweaty, I couldn’t think. A strange noise was coming from outside. Ha ha! It sounded like the Saxons wanted revenge. Silly Saxons. Without thinking and regreting it, I stormed outside.

 

 

Jul
16
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405AD

Dear Diary

Today was an exhausting day on the boat, it was the most boring day of my life. We sang a song once a Viking went to sea but all he could see was the deep blue sea (twice). Our captain screamed CHARGE! Everyone rode a horse, and burnt down houses and lightning raid was over, as we we’re going to build camp we stepped on guts,. We built camp, by two rivers we thought it was a good idea but suddenly, the Englefiled people shouted WE WANT REVENGE!!! (4x). We tend to run away but we couldn’t because of the two rivers so we had to surrender to the Saxons.

Jul
06
Jun
22
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When I grow up, I want to be a hairdresser. The reason why I want to be one, is because you can be creative with it, and you can use this skill in many jobs such as, a beautician , wedding shops,actual hair dressing shops and much more. At the moment my favourite hair styles are: a side bun, a pull through (which is a pony tail, with a bit of hair pulled through the bobble, and hair over it) a normal bun and a side pony tail. There are lots more that I like however those are my favourite at the moment. My family can tell I really want to be one, as I always practice in my spare time. No one really inspires me but myself. There are a few people that inspire me but not many. I know every one should set a goal of who they want to be, and have quite a few of them, I do have a few, but not as many as some. So that’s what I want to be when I am older!

Jun
22
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-Why is blogging fun?

Blogging is fun, because you can read each others work, and take out the bits you like, and add them to your own writing.

-How does the blog help you with your learning and why?

Blogging can help you, because you can post a piece of work, and people can comment to tell you what to improve, so then you go back, and add that in, then post it again. So people can comment each time you post it, and after 10 times it will be amazing.

-What is your favourite part of the blog?

My favourite part of the blog, is being able to be on it wherever, whenever.

-What is the thing you could improve about the blog?

If i could improve 1 thing, ONLY ONE it would be that, all the year 4 classes would have one blog. So lets say year 3, year 5, and year 6 would have a blog, they could have 1 blog per a year group. In other words, year 3 would have a separate blog, but there would 1 blog, for all 3 classes in  year 3. Year 5 would have 1 blog in between the 3 classes. And I think you get it now.

 

Jun
12
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Cautiously, Jemima stepped closer to the shining light that blinded her eyes. Taking a deep breath, Jemima walked into the sun. Her body rapidly swirled round in circles. Jemima was intrigued by e light that she just went into and where she is going to end up. Closing her eyes tightly, Jemima could feel a breeze through her hair. She opened her eyes. Admiring the beauty in Pixie kingdom, she ran across the fresh emerald grass not knowing about someone was spying on her… The white marshmallow clouds drifted along the crystal cobalt sky playing in the wind. Smooth stone marked the paths, making Jemimas feet  tingle on the beautiful path. Queen Madeleine stepped out of nowhere, trapping Jemima viciously and dangerously…

Jun
12
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As the door creaks open, she travels back in time to a hole new world. Gradually she sees a deadly jungle with hungry lions. Which, have spiky teeth. Jemima was intrigued to know why lions were in a jungle.

Jun
12
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As she opened the door, a shimmer of light turned to complete mayhem. She was intrigued to go in. For what seemed like ages, she didn’t know where she was, it was unknown, but as the day went on she finally got it… It was the future… However this future was worse. Much much worse. This place was right next to the coast, and unfortunately to oceanic plates moved which formed a colossal tsunami right next to her. As her heart pumped like mad her Palms started to sweat. Little infant girls were washed away, there future ruined. Jemima couldn’t help but run for her life, she found the door and fled. Whether she believed the future or not, she wasn’t looking forward to it.

Jun
12

Step by step, Jemima crept through the ancient, dusty museum. Cobwebs were everywhere, broken glass shattered on the floor. Jemima needed to be very careful. As she glanced around, she noticed the books seemed unloved and were scattered around with pages everywhere. Out of the corner of her eye, she noticed a mysterious glass coffin. She was intrigued to see what was in there! As she starred at the glass coffin, she noticed a crimson fire like egg. As vast as a skull, the egg was nestled in the corner of the coffin. Suddenly the demon like egg began to crack. A faint crack appeared. Immediately pipping hot lava overflowed. Her heart was thumping, her knees were knocking, and her palms were shaking in fear.

Jun
12
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Inching closer, she passed through the glowing secret door,uncovering a mysterious passageway. The walls were shimmering like a disco ball. Intrigued, she tip toed further. Suddenly, an overpowering smell of rotten eggs hit her. She heard a growl like a rumbling tornado. In front of her was an immense, petrifying shadow. Legs shaking, heart thumping, palms sweating she turned, scorched hands on the walls.

Jun
12
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Jemima stepped through the door, and gets closet to the gleaming light. She spots a screen and chair. As she stepped on a platform, she moved from one place to another. Soon she was in the chair, locked in the room. Intrigued Jemima turned the screen in. This is no normal screen, it was a hypnotising screen. Just then the screen turned on and swirls moved. Jemima got sucked into the screen. It was her future. There was a note and it said ” you must find the crimson button, then you can get out.” She ran as fast as she can and looked around

Jun
12
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With out a shadow of a doubt, she took one step and there it was, a beacon of light shone upon her face. So bright. The young girl could see all of the people in her family. It was showing something weird. For some reason it was sowing all the people who are alive was showing them being killed. Hands sweating, heart thumping and spine shivering. Suddenly something or someone was chanting “Get out or what you just saw will come true.”

Jun
12
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Speedly, Jermima rushed in there lights beaming in her eyes it was eye blinding. Jemima slowly walked through the beacon of light and then she saw a evil villain which was ement to be locked up ages ago it was intriguing to know how he was alive. For Jermima it’s too tempting to let him out so jermima did it was a bad idea as he  had superpowers that was destroying land. But then she realised if she did let him out he would destroy the hole town. No clue what to do.Shivers,pins and needles,heart thumping in Jemimas body.she was scared to death by the mysterious villan.

Jun
12
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Just then she took a deep breath with no sign of fear, she took a giant step in through the door and Jemima gazed around.She found a toy store she did not know it was haunted. So she bought a bear soon she new that something was wrong the bear started to move and talk she was intrigued what was going on so she took it back but it stalked her all day she picked it up and threw it in the water. She never eve saw it in her entire life again   so she went on with her adventure of the secret book. Jemima scanned around the deserted horror place to see if she could get rid of the book anywhere. She heard a rattlesnake hanging from the ceiling. She threw mysterious book at the snake it took the book and she followed the snake around through the haunted house to the way out.

Jun
12
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A shiver ran  through her  entire body, as she touched a book  the door opened. Jamina  felt intreague, her hart was thumping through out her chest,she couldn’t breathe with excitement. She sees a colossal tank of water with sharks and jelly fish. Her knees where banging together,she was about to fall to the ground. Jaminas teeth was shattering, she couldn’t even move. She froze.

Jun
10

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Warning stories

Warning stories

Although she had been warned, Jemima didn’t listen. The excitement was consuming her. She needed to know what would happen when she found the book…

Jun
09

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Please add different types of openers –
How openers – Blue
When openers – Yellow
Where openers – Pink

Jun
09
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YAY! Yesterday, I went to Pinewood Judo Club with my Academy Training Team and we did a grading session.So as some of you may know I am already Orange belt in judo and for British Judo Association I am 4th mon.So I attempted to go for my green belt.And guess what! I PASSED.Yay now I am level 8 so I went up 2 levels from my previous belt!After to chill us all out we had a nice BBQ.Yum-Yum!

Jun
08

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Think about how you can re-order the words in a sentence to make it more interesting for the reader.

E.g. The revolting, putrid smelling creature crept up to the shivering girl, who was cowering in the corner.

Could be more interesting by being changing the first word…

Cowering in the corner, shivered a girl, while the revolting, putrid smelling creature crept up to her.

Change the order of these sentences to engage the reader more:

1) She stormed into her living room and lunged forward onto her parents.
2) He shut the box as quickly as he could and charged up the ladder.
3) Tyler couldn’t control himself, his heart was thumping, his palms were sweating.
4) Peter scrambled up the ladder feeling relieved that he could finally go home.

http://www.earlybritishkingdoms.com/kids/brits_alone.html
http://www.bbc.co.uk/schools/primaryhistory/romans/roman_remains/
http://www.localhistories.org/roman.html

Jun
02
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May
25
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I do judo and my club is called Osaka. It is a very good judo club i’m on red belt 2 Mon I’ve got 2 judo suits one is blue and the over one is white. The white one is for my judo commotions I’ve done 4 commotions  and i got 3 medals I’ve got 2 silvers and one bronze   I hope u enjoyed it

May
22

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Guided reading- The chapter you have just read, involves Passepartout joining the circus.
Using the pictures above, write a description of the circus. Remember to select your words carefully to give the readers an image. Add your descriptions in the comment below.
I look forward to reading them! 🙂

May
18

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Look at the background image. I would like you to think of adjectives and phrases which will describe the eagle.

May
11
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Using the picture on your table, write the first few lines of a poem about it.

May
07

May
07
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Your own Roman Catapult!!

Are you one of those child’s who like launching things, but always get told off for doing it? Well, with this simple step by step instruction it could lead you to throwing things all over the place! But….less dangerous. With this Roman Catapult instruction sheet you can be in the fun! Are you the only one not to have these amazing builds?

What you need:
() 6 long wooden sticks – Plant ones are fine
() 1 plastic cup
() A majority of long and short elastic bands
() A sharp pencil to pierce a hole in the cup

1. First, get the 3 pieces of your wooden sticks and form them into a triangle shape, make sure they’re sticking out a little so it works!
2. After that, tie them carefully together, so they don’t fall apart. Make sure you get your other 3 sticks ready!
3. Next, join the other 3 sticks so it looks like a triangular prism. Make sure you(tightly) tie the elastic bands around the wooden sticks – you need 4 long ones, so it is big enough and your base doesn’t fall apart.

4. Finally get your cup and sharp pencil. Get the cup and pierce 3 holed in it, 1 at the top and 2 at the bottom – either side. With your 3 ,long, elastic bands you will need to put your cup tied by the holes with the elastic bands. It’s quite tricky, but you’ll soon get the hang of it! WARNING: your cup needs to be in the middle, but a bit more far down.

5. Then, GET YOUR FRIENDS!! Put rubbers, pencils balls and loads more things to fire at your friends. Get firing and enjoy!

The End…

May
07
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DEAR DIARY

Today I was just farming out side and my next door neighbour who was in shock, said the Romans were coming in their boats. I ran back to my hut and I was worried, unhappy that the Romans
Were coming. My teeth were chattering while I camped in my hut…

ONE hour later the Romans were attacking the village. They were wrecking things. They were knocking things over fire spreading like a bad disease. As people are getting stabbed and blood is pulsating every where from people’s intestines… My palm were sweating.

After, the invasion everyone was in horrific shock. It looked like a bomb site the place was wrecked. There were small flames and houses were battered.

Sam wood

May
07
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Dear Diary

Yesterday I watched a video,but it was torn apart,because some of 4HC attacked our class and made it into a complete dump sight. Everyone was shocked or even distraught.

After that, 4S came in looking at the class in anger all of us were like what and all I was worried about was my chocolate milk,luckily one of my friends saved it for me. My heart was pounding as quick as possible,because of what happened.

After the death…tiding up I wanted to be lazy,but I couldn’t,because it was my classroom,it took about 15-20 minutes,because it was in an rubbish pile. Fumingly I changed a little.

May
07
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21/4/15 Dear Diary,
So first we travelled slowly into the Hive and our hilarious teacher, started turning on her iPad and gradually her smile turned up-side down…..Then Miss Startup started showing us a short clip of 4HC Ripping our classroom to shreds.

Everyone was devastated, we all sighed in sadness and our knees we’re shaking. As time went on, heart broken 4S strolled into the destroyed Huts. As we strode into class… My jaw dropped and my eyes where burning! In displeasure is aid to myself why would 4HC be so mean?I was devastated.

May
07
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Dear diary ,

Um… I didn’t like last week very much,it was…well I don’t know really know how to explain but I will try it all started when me and the soldiers were on, the extremely long ,boat ride to a helpless peculiar Celt village which took 6hrs to get there I can’t believe it can you? Finally land was site at that point I was exited So I freaked out. However I started to feel sick because I couldn’t contain my excitement so I tried my hardest to take my mind of is but it didn’t work so I just jumped with joy. All of a sudden we hit land I was so brave also determined to win the battle.

A few hrs after arrival
Finally we were there, as you could have imagined everyone ran out but not me. Ok,I did sprint out with the rest raaaaa…. Slash one heart plunged. Eight kills (by me) later the last on i killed I will explain how I did it. Viscously grabbed my sword covered in revolting blood I stabbed a Celt in the neck and pulsating blood splattered all over my face. That kill felt sooo good. Maybe that was to much description (sorry)

May
07
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HOW TO MAKE A catapult

Why would you not want to make a catapult?

How you would make a catapult you will need
1. 6plant sticks
2. 1 plastic cup
3. 8-10 variation of sizes elastic bands
4. Scissors or pencil
5. Blue tac

As well it’s all home made!
First:You would need to gently make plant stick triangle and tie three sides with elastic bands put do it carefully !

Next:You would make a prism shape with your elastic bands tie all the sticks so then you would screech the triangle shape with elastic bands.

Last: Put holes in the cup at the top then put elastic bands in the cup and then your done. Now you can beat up your sister or brother .

May
07
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Do you want to be the first person to make an authentic replica of a Roman catapult? Well, you can if you follow these easy instructions.

All you need is:

6 plant sticks,

1 plastic cup

8-10 variation of sizes elastic bands

Scissors

And blu tac

Step1, you need to get the plant sticks and put 3 of them slowly on the bottom in a triangular shape. Then get 3 elastic bands and carefully tie them together.

Step2, you have to grab the other 3 plant sticks and make the shape into a bottomless pyramid by putting the sticks on top of the 3 corners. Using elastic bands tie the sticks at the top.

Step3, now you need the plastic cup and get the last of the elastic bands and attach the cup to the top and corners. For this you may need 2 elastic band on 1 corner or more.

Then your done.

May
07
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Dear diary,

Today was awful.  The Romans attacked our poor, little village. Early in the morning, I was going to play, when I heard the sound of hollowing voices in the distance. Sprinting through the village, a fellow neighbour told the village that the Romans will attack. Biting my nails, my knees nervously shook. I  was speechless standing as still as a statue.

At that precise moment, the Romans charged. Armour clattered. Flames flew above my head, I was shaking in case they landed on me. Noises of slicing swords made me look back. Shouting warriors marched to the house, with wood breaking it felt like my heart snapped in half. Screaming people, who deafened everyone, ran for their lives. Peoples blood pulsating out of their neck every step squelch, squelch on the ground.

After hours of battle, piles of wood lay on the floor splats of blood on the floor. Crying family members sit on there knees praying that, that never happened. There was no happiness, and everyone was gloomy. Although every thing was gone, I was glad- at last their gone. Biting my nails, I wondered if they will come back. Weeping looking at memories gone. Now I am glad, but will they come back…

May
07
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1.4.43AD

Dear Diary,

Today I was training in the town of Rome. Suddenly, a message from the head of the army got delivered to me it read:

Dear Julius,

Tomorrow we are going to head out to Britannia. From there we will invade the Celtic villages. Pack up and meet me at the dock.

Your sincerely
C.Cardic
Head of army
So I got packed up and started to travel.
2.4.43AD

Dear Diary,

It was a rough journey yesterday the wind was blowing it was pouring down. But today it’s really sunny. We set up camp and we’re waiting for the signal. When the signal came we started attacking. My sword was pointed at the village. Suddenly the Celtic army started charging. In the line I was standing next to my friend Tom. We were in the front line. All of a sudden, we got the command haunt so we stopped but the celts kept charging and pierced my mate with a blood thirsty sword in his chest and his guts plunged in my face.

May
07
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A Catapult
Have you ever wanted to ping your friends in the chest with small things?Well if you do follow these easy steps to make your own Roman catapult.There is no talent needed.

You will need:
Six plant sticks
10-11 medium sized elastic bands
One plastic cup
Scissors

Step One: Carefully, take three plant sticks and place them in a triangle going up so they all point into the middle of them so, they look like a TP.Wrap one band around the top to hold it in place.

Step Two:Then make a 2D triangle on the surface and, overlap the corners to connect them.Put the Two well made parts together with more strong bands to tie them.

Step Three:Take you cup and make three slits,with your scissors,and loop a band per slit and attach it slowly so the top and two of the firm corners.

Step Four:Forcefully,pull the cup back and enjoy your model.<:D

May
07
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Dear Diary,
Yesterday, we went to the Hive and watched a video on 4HC demolishing our class, that was tidy before, and taking the precious Mila.

As quick as possible, we rushed back to see the bombsight of a class.

Then Mrs Carter interviewed people to seeps they felt- most of us were sad or even distraught. As the class was tidying the class up the rest were speaking (it was class that looked like a monsters cave)

After that we went to get Mila back and surprisingly it took 9 of us to get back the adorable bear, 4 of us the front route and me and 4 others went the back route. Thankfully after a jaw dropping attack they gave in and we received the 4S royalty.

May
07
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Introduction

Every right thinking person believes that, this is an amazing, fun Catipult, read the instructions below and you will have a Catapult in no time. So let’s get started:

what you will need:

.6 green plant sticks

.1 plastic cup

.8-10 variation of rubber bands

How to make the Catapult

1 First you will need to get all of your plant sticks and get three of them and tie them together on a triangular base.

2 Then get the last three plant sticks and tie them together at the top and the bottom with the rubber bands.

3 Next, get the cup and put three holes in it on the right hand side and the left at the top then put the last hole at the top which would be higher.

4 Then you will get three rubber bands and tie the a knot in each of the holes do it very carefully if you don’t you might break the cup and the rubber band.

5 After that,stretch the bands. Do it slowly and put the  rubber band at the top. Put the bottom bands to the top right hand side and the left hand side of the cup.

6 And there you have it your very own home made Roman catapult and have much fun with it as you want.

May
07
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Do you want to beat up your friends? Well now it’s possible. Just scroll down, and find out how to build a Roman Style Catapult. In 7 easy steps! Children 4+ can make this working structure!

What you need:
-6 garden sticks
-1 plastic cup
-8—10 variation sizes of elastic bands
-Scissors/A sharp pencil
-Blue tack (optional)

First, get your garden sticks (3 of them) and make a triangle.
Next, tie all 3 corners (make sure they are all tight)
After that, make a weird /\ shape, however DONT TIE IT!! You will need it untied in the next step.
Meanwhile, and another stick to that, and make a strange bottomless pyramid.
Slowly, tie the top with an elastic band.
Carefully, put it over the bottom and gently attach each corner to corner
Gently,Get your can and put blue tack near the top (not to close, not to far) and poke the hole
Repeat step 7, two more times and make a triangle with the holes.
When you have done that, in those holes put an elastic band.
Next, line up the elastic bands with the triangle on either face and wrap (tightly) all the bands.
Enjoy shooting your friends!

May
07
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Do you want to make a Roman style catapult? We’ll your in luck. This page will blow your mind when you read the astonishing instructions.

To make a Roman style catapult you will need…

1. 6 plant sticks

2. 12 elastic bands

3. 1 plastic cup

1) First start with putting your plant sticks in a pyramid  shape.

2) Get 9 elastic bands and wrap two each around every corner and the top.

3) When the plant sticks are in a pyramid shape get your plastic cup.

4) Then get scissors and cut three holes in the plastic cup: Top Tip use blue tac.

5) After that you will need 3 elastic bands.

6) And then you will have to put the bands in one of the 3 holes in the cup and attach the elastic bands to the nearest corner on the plant sticks.

And there you have it your own Roman style catapult!

May
07
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Dear diary. 43 BC

Just a normal day when I was having a bath in the street, I got a message saying that in 2 days there was going to be an invasion. I didn’t know what was going to happen, my teeth where chattering and my knees where buckling.

As the soldiers where getting closer I could hear their armour clattering.I was speech less.About to attack I quickly hid behind a colossal rock,but I didn’t wast to watch because I didn’t want to get killed.My hart was pounding.I was so scared you wouldn’t believe it I could hear banging and crashing I hated it.

After the invasion I came out and guts and blood where every where,I didn’t know what to do.My Hands where in my face because every thing was on fire and my house was burnt down I was so happy that they have left but so sad but I lived my life like a Celt.

May
07
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Dear diary,

This month has been adventurous, and hard work. It all started off when I was scrubbing the blood off my armour. We ,me and the soldiers, heard a cry from the HQ (head quarters) saying we needed to invade innocent civilians in the village of Elecent. All you could hear far miles was the sound of clattering armour. We all felt ready and muscular.

We all board our wooden sailing boats and headed for the village. The whole time on the boat, we had our fists in the air and our feet stomping. Unfortunately one of the soldiers stomped too hard, and nearly sunk the ship. So he got thrown over board. Lots of us grew bored, but then we found out that we had only been on board for 10 minutes. It felt like years before we arrived, but finally got we did. As soon as we put our foot on land we started running and riding. Into the village we went. I entered a cottage and there sitting down quietly sat a preying family, now because I am a roman soldier I should kill them but I couldn’t do it so I left. Surprisingly the civilians were strong agents us however we were still stronger. I felt like a coward, not killing the family but at the same time I was glad.

We left the village in a state, worse then another we had left before. We boarded the boats again knowing we had victory agents them. One of our soldiers, was still living but had blood squirting out every where. It has been tiring and upsetting time even for me to say, but something that made me smile when I thought there was nothing to smile at was… I didn’t kill the family. Oh bye the way on the way back we came across our long-lost soldier you know the one that got thrown overboard we sore him… Well whet was left of him.

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Dear Diary, 21.4.15

Today I was full of felling’s. We were in in the the Hive when it stared, we were called from Miss Startup to watch this crazy video, it was 4HC furiously wrecking the class room. We were all shouting and screaming, but by then it was done, we had been invaded!

Then we decided to come back to the massive mess and clean up. It was a mess the chairs were in the wrong place and upside! A table was right next to the door and agin upside! All our jaws dropped.

When cleaning up people were getting interviewed. It was hard really hard to tidy up, moving tables
and chairs around.Suddenly Miss Startup shouted Milas gone we all rushed to Miss Startup. We all shouting and screaming Miss Startup sent kids to get back!

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Pink – Persuasive phrases from videos
Green – Persuasive phrases you already know
Blue – How are the videos persuasive apart from the phrases?

Apr
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Today you will be working in your project groups and visiting four different stations.

Station 1:

Researching about your 3 main selling points of why someone should visit Rome.
Remember to only choose one three things… e.g. if you are talking about food, choose one type of food to talk about. If you are talking about places to visit, choose one place to visit. You have a maximum of 2 minutes for your video.

Station 2:

Choose up to 2 pictures which you would like as your background for your Green Screen.
(These need to be big, high quality pictures, so they aren’t blurry when it is as your background)

Station 3:

Watch the following links.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1kUZNQASL_8 Visit Scotland


Visit England


Thomas Cook


Thomson


M&S

Station 4:

Complete the Linoit with all the persuasive phrases you have noticed from these videos.
Think about…
-How are these videos persuasive?
-What phrases do they use instead of ones like…’every intelligent person believes that…’?

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This video is about The Romans invading Britain.

Watch the video above and using the events on your table, put them in chronological order. (As a challenge, find the dates of when they happened too!)

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Here are the feelings of people in our class after it was suddenly invaded!

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Use the GREEN post its for facts you know
Use PINK post it notes for things you would like to find out

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Learning about digestion

Learning about digestion

Science digestive system lessonToday we had great fun learning about how our food is digested and the function of our intestines, stomach and oesophagus.

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The something trees swish somethingly in their rows.

For Mr Mitchell.

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Once a upon time there lived, a girl the girl name was Mary. Mary lived in a straw house with her baby sister and her dad and mum. They are realy pore but  Mary didn’t just site around, she said we wont be pore, i’ll dance so we will have money. Her mum was so pleased so Mary  head of to the village. And dance she danced that well she got , 1,0000 money so Mary went home. She told her family how much money she got so they went to the shops and spen most of the money….

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Today, we will have some time to peer assess the videos that you produced using Tellagami last week. During the Skype session with Graham Hill from The Deep in Hull, Graham challenged you to create a video that would persuade people to help save an endangered animal. For this activity, you will need:

1. Your script that you wrote in your books
2. Your Tellagami video on an ipad

Below are some prompts from the writing station last week, click on them to enlarge them:

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Working in pairs, you will have 15 minutes with a partner to spend on each video. Questions you need to ask each other are:

1. Did the video persuade you?
2. Which features of persuasion did the author use well?
3. How well did the author vary the way sentences were opened?
4. Did the author use any rhetorical questions?
5. How well did the author use emotive language?
YOUR CHALLENGE

1. Watch your partner’s video with them and discuss the following points:
*Did the Video persuade you?
*Which features of persuasion did the author use well?
*How well did the author vary sentence openers?
*Did the author use any rhetorical questions?
*How well did the author use emotive language?
*How well did the author use their voice in the video?

2. Agree with your partner on three things they could do to improve their video using the prompts below and write these on three post it notes so they can be stuck in their books near their writing.

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3. You will have a further 15 minutes to swap over so that both of you have 3 post it notes on points that could make your script even better.

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Lately we have been learning about endangered animals,one of the ones we learnt about was the Dhole. No one new what a Dhole was, but then we found out that it was a wild wolf that strangly looked like a fox…It had a bushy black as coal tail,and really the same apearence as a fox. The Dhole is an endangered species and there is only a mere (just) 2000 left in the forests of Asia. Now i know you will probably be thinking that 2000 is a huge number but really there is not,compare 2000 to the amount of people on Earth there is a massive difference. People who hunt the Dhole are basically doing this to a pet dog,just because  they are wild that doesn’t mean that ot is ok to do it. Dhole’s only fight back because they are scared and really hunters are going in to their habitat and destroying it. Why the Dhole’s?

Mar
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Class reward

After lots of hard work, we earned our class reward and decided to go outside for some fun and games! We played a football match, played Tag 3 and did some gymnastics!

Mar
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Check out the amazing bug hotels we made this week! 🙂
We used collaboration and creativity skills to help us create these designs!Photo Collage Maker_ZuW0Vv

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Hello! I don’t know about you but I LOVE reading, but i’m not the only person in my class who LOVES  reading there is also a girl in my class called Emma, and she reads so much she could of read a library by now (she hasn’t YET). So me and her thought we should make a club of reading ,which was a really good idea, so we did. Now you might think that going to each others house every day wold be hard to do, well instead we Face Time yeah it is technology but we don’t play games on it we read instead. It is a great way to pass time. We also have a break in the middle to get a drink,  discuss the book, and think of what  might happen next. We don’t get forced to do this club we just do it for fun. If you LOVE reading then why don’t you make a club?

Mar
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Reading will help you with your spellings and learn new, adventurous words. To make reading fun you can always do it with a friend. You might be wondering how it is possible, for me, or my friend, Sophie, to come round each others houses. We don’t. We do it over face time. All you need to do is, take turns reading a page each.

Mar
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Below are some tutorials to help you complete the tasks set for you this morning! You will be split into three groups and you will have around 30 minutes in each station. Each station has a focus:

Station 1 – Using the App Tellagami: Click HERE
Station 2 – Exploring persuasion
Station 3 – Scripting your writing

Station 1 – Using Tellagami
By the end of this session you should have:
1. Watched the tutorial.
2. Had a play with the App.
3. Understand what all the buttons do.
4. Know how to add a background taken from a screenshot on your iPad.

How to use Tellagami:

How to take a screen shot on your iPad to add as a background for your Tellagami:

Station 2 – Persuasion
By the end of this session you should have:
1. Watched the various videos thinking about what they did well.
2. Begin to think about what your advert will look like and what you will be saying.
3. Start looking for pictures on your iPad that you could include as the background to your advert.

Using repetition (Disappearing)

NOT waffling! The first 30 seconds of this video show how being precise and straight to the point could have the impact you want:

No words but look at how this video uses emotion. READ the signs the animals are holding – facts and emotion:

Station 3 – What are you going to say? (YOUR SCRIPT)
By the end of this session, you should have:
1. Watched the video on scripts
2. Written out your script in your books
3. Rehearsed reading out your script thinking about pace
4. Read out your script to another pupil.
5. Listened to another pupil read you their script.

Remember you will only have 30 seconds to get your key points across. You will only have time for 3 or 4 sentences.
Key things to include in a playscript:

Here’s what the pupils produced independently using the above information:

Cameron’s Tellagami
Luke’s Tellagami
Caitlin’s Tellagami
Harry’s Tellagami
Poppy’s Tellagami
Alex’s Tellagami
Aimee’s Tellagami
Caitlyn’s Tellagami
Skye’s Tellagami
Hayden’s Tellagami
Eva’s Tellagami
Rhys’s Tellagami
Josh’s Tellagami
Daniel’s Tellagami
Harrison’s Tellagami
Hope’s Tellagami
Harry’s Tellagami
Ysabel’s Tellagami
Kayleigh’s Tellagami
Kyle’s Tellagami
Adam’s Tellagami
Taiya’s Tellagami
Keeley’s Tellagami
Ben’s Tellagami
Sophie’s Tellagami
Harry’s Tellagami
Jess’s Tellagami
Katelin’s Tellagami
Jacques Tellagami
Milo’s Tellagami
Emma’s Tellagami
Brooke’s Tellagami
Ellie’s Tellagami

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Below are 5 sentences. With a partner, write out the sentence with the words in a different order in a comment.

1. The Hallelujah Mountains float above the forest regions of Pandora circulating like icebergs at sea

2. On Pandora, huge chunks of Unobtanium rip from the surface of the moon.

3. The Hallelujah Mountains have cliffs with waterfalls cascading off them turning into mist and clouds.

4. The Mountain Banshee chooses to roost and rest on the Hallelujah Mountains.

5. Huge vines twist dangling below connecting some of the Hallelujah Mountains.

Mar
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The revolting ,deadly creature strolls into the deadly forest. It is 25ft heigh feet to head. It has soles head and a black heart.the revolting beast has a poisons body and had a body like armour.

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What do you know about The Romans? Use a GREEN post it for things you definately know, and a PINK post it for things you would like to find out about.
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Mar
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The Great Leonoptryx, is the most feared beast on the planet as it’s size is collosoll. It’s size is approximately 19ft along 12ft tall. The flesh eating, bone crushing monster, swoops through the toxic atmosphere  at a speed of  167mph. The amber, soul sucking creature will  ,annihilate  anything in its revolting view. Rapidly, this beastly creature sneakily stalks it’s prey and when the time is right, dives and snaps it’s prey in half while blood prays everywhere splitting on the crumbly, rocky ground.

Mar
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Hunting for his prey. The Thanator,who has a burst of flame in his mouth, has skin as armor. It’s a shiny as the decaying water it drinks from. Without a shadow of a doubt, the violent, malevolent beast can plunge his Daggears into innocent  animals that do no harm to anyone, or anything. Creaping around the forest, with his venomous, toxic tail, hoping to murder some other fierce beasts, and not harming animals. This blood curdling monster, has terror in his black hearted eyes.

Mar
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This colossal, flying, beast’s wing span is  up to 10 metres long. It’s Daggastab ( the point on its wing )  can even slice trough iron and stone!. The Tearse ( the teeth ) are as piercing as  shard of glass that can kill anything In one millisecond. The lava like wings  can flap at a million miles per hour .

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This courageous agile beast can scrunch the living daylight out of anyone. The staby tooth can cut anyone and anything into a myriad of slices. This finger-numbing, flesh-eating Leonoptryx and with dagger like claws that can plunge into humans sides making blood rush up to your chest and burst you open. This mysterious monster has a tummy that drags people in and devowers your flesh.

Mar
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creature lurks in the blue sky. Ready to pounce on any human it stumbles across it soars through the stormy skies flapping its wings rapidly while it beats its cyan and black wings hardly. This violent,  vicious, bloodcurdling creature also known as The Banshee has four beastly wings that flap aggressively. Its tiger like eyes are so good at spotting humans it could spot anything in seconds… Its razor, sharp teeth are used for flesh eating on humans and other creatures because there teeth are as sharp as a sharks teeth so they can gobble anyone who approaches. This gruesome beast has claws not like any other that can grip tightly on branches or a colossal tree. Without a shadow of doubt this horrifying hideous creature will make any humans run for there life in fear.

Mar
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This flexible wicked creature, is a flying beast that  sometimes has a soft side, but really it’s just a soulless bone  crushing human ,destroyer. without a shadow of a doubt, this revolting violent beast makes human run in fear, when stalking its prey. However this creature that is terrifying, has natural beauty on the inside that they do not show around other creatures and beasts they just show there fierce side. The Banshee is one of the fearsome beasts on Pandora.

Mar
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Rapidly, the agile beast soars through the sky as the screeching sound towers from its piercing jaw.On the end of this terrifying beast lies a venomous dagtail, which can easily plunge through bone and flesh without struggle. On the side of its scaly wings there is a razor-blade stabber which slices through its deadly pray in seconds.This blood curdling beast is a killing machine, as it would eat anything in its path.If this beast sights anything, it’s eagle eye will immediately spot it and it will be away to devour the predator.

Mar
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This soulless, revolting monster, can be so bone crushing, it can shoot out rapid fire blades from its spine ripping mouth. In one flash, it can devour a vulnerable, timid animal. This blood sucking creature, is 21ft 7inches long and it’s dagging ( dagger and crushing). 

Mar
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This blood- curdling beast can plunge through anything rapidly, the viper wolf scampers across the cliff.  It is as muscular as anything it can slice through metal with its daggear and it will scratch you with its beastly clause. It has dagger like teeth they can munch through anything.If it touches anything with its venomous skin it would be poisoned. Without a shadow of a doubt,this creature has a black heart. This spine ripping animal can slice through human flesh and blood will rapidly come out of your body.This courageous beast spy’s on its pray whilst it’s creeping up to its small pray.

Mar
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Appearance

This bone-crushing beast is terrifying to every animal it sees. The monster towers at 3 meters in length from its hind legs to its shoulders. It eats human flesh in a millisecond. The violent creature  is soulless and has no flesh. It travels on the canopy of  the pandora trees. Slowly it creeps up on the prey and pounces. Even though it’s like a wolf its 10 times the size!! It has a myriad of teeth as sharp as sharks jaws. The creature is as skinny as a fish. Its dagires shoot out blades of poison hitting anything and it would be instant death and its tail shoots out venom.

 

Mar
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This bone-crusing monster, has a bright emerald eye. It’s teeth are like daggers,it would take at least 10-15 seconds to crush you. Without a shadow of doubt, this monster is at least 9 metres long and its hight is 6 metres. The revolting creature has bright yellow and green skin, that is poisoinous,if you touch it you would be dead in 1 second. When it strolls around and sees something in the corner of its gloomy eye it would turn around as fast as it could and hunt for the creature.

Mar
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The blood curdilling beast, feeds on fresh, flesh of the timid animals. The roaring wicked monster can plunge, into a body of a rhino. When the venomous, evil beast stabs people, the blood burst’s up to your chest and the, bad beast has a juicy  blood drink. The stomping monster, stalks it’s prey, until the beast, snatched out its claw,s and it will rip the dull, skin back. The soulless beast, smashes it’s prey from skull to spine. The black heart thumps, for it’s next prey to com and battle!

Mar
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The thick skinned hammer head tythanasaurus is so violent that it could kill 20 humans in one bang. It’s threatening hammer, attached on the top of it’s head is so solid, that if someone was in a fight with it they would have no chance to survive. It’s blade’s on its body is stronger than steel, and no matter what anyone threw at it they would never win. When this beastly prehistoric animal charges even the most toughest humans bones would rattle until they nearly fall out. This blood curdling, spine crushing brute has a revolting head that is so migit like, even if one na-vi was to sit upon there head they would crash to the floor. This brutal beast would devour anything with ease.

Mar
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This bone crushing beast, stretches at a colossal 180 foot long and towers above its vulnerable prey. Prowling through the foliage, this heartless creature’s cat like eyes glare into the soul of its victims. Heavily, The Thanator breaths and makes a thunderous noise that echoes and shakes the cracked, hard ground. To defend its self, this revolting animal rapidly shoots out Sparrows from its moss coloured ears. It uses it’s muscular legs to lurk and crouch down on the ground, before devouring its helpless prey. It swiftly drags behind its vast snake like tail crushing everything in its path.

Mar
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This soulless beast,who didn’t have a heart,had  solid bones that could slice threw a vast  recking ball. It’s revolting teeth was as sharp as a razor blade,it had 2 Daggpoisons that shoot poisonous darts out of it  that could kill anything. The skinless beast,who was emerald,black,had an eye site like an eagle,so he could sneak up on its prey.

Mar
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The Thanators, is a six leged beast with slicing blades on it’s iron head, nothing stands in it’s thudding, thundering footsteps. It has flexible legs, it’s claws are like bone crushing axes. It’s heart less back is like a shield and it’s so shiny like a dagger like sword.It’s jaw breaking Sharks mouth is so hard it’s like a piercing rock.

Mar
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Mar
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This venomous  creature, lurks around deadly,lethal tropical forest. The mysterious beast, can slice threw a bolder. It’s teeth are as sharp as razor blade,it’s stronger than hulk and hunts for other animals every day. Its piercing sharp dagger ears cold shoot poisonous darts out of it.

Mar
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Trudging through the gloomy,lifeless forest,the empty hearted horror destroys everything in it’s footsteps.Stomping through the deadly forest, it towers at a hight of 14ft8.His claws are a volcanic, bony colour.The creatures blood is as yellow as the sun(very steamy.)

Mar
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The soulless beast stands proud as the others howl in their habitats. The skinless creature lurks on the edge of the terrifying, deadly cliff. Step by step, the Viper Wolf  crawls along the mossy floor and it’s flippers slide along with it. Its teeth are as sharp as a dagger and can easily slice through a boulder.

Mar
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This courageous beast, can slice through human flesh and bone without struggling. Without a shadow of a doubt, this creatures dagger like claws can plunge into humans sides making blood rush up to your chest and burst you open. This spine ripping monster has a chest that opens and drags you in and feasts on your flesh. Green, poisonous slime drips off it`s ears [ Slites] burning holes in the under world.

Mar
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This finger-numbing, flesh eating Banshee, soars at 180ft 7inches [which is up to the Pandora moon]. With skin like the aquatic ocean, this beast could eat anyone in a millisecond. The flipper-flopper could smash a volcano into abliveon. The hoowlar stab could tap anyone and then chop them into slices.

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This revolting monster, stands hovering over like a towering tree, at 5 foot 9 inches from claw to horn. Even though, it has no skin it is still one finger numbing creature. Its fragile feet get caught into the lethal ground. Also 24 7 it hunts down most vulnerable creatures ever. The death sucking heart makes their horn screech.